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Um...

Honestly I can imagine this as the bloody rage song

SuperGoodSound responds:

synth1 is king

my story

A satanistic cult has taken over most of earth and my family and I are hideing at home. Most of our friends and nehbors are hideing also. All we have is at least a weeks worth of suplise.Tops. We also have a small radio. we listen to it every day hopeing that good news would show,but that hope left when we listend one day.
*crackle* Cult has taken out Australia! no sighns of local life! *crackle* The government has also fallen ann and...whos that? who the hell?! How did he get in?!
How...What are you doeing?! leave me alone!! Leave-OH LORD!! AAAGGHH!!! *craaccckkllee* Radio dies. we hide out hearing the sound of the cults above our heads we even hear a body hit the floor every now and then.Our rations are gone. We start starveing.My mother starts getting ill and I know that she will get worse due to the fact that where in our basement with the rats wich we eat in despratness.The cult goes qwiet for a few days. We deside to go to the Mildred family to check up on them and see if thier alive. When we get to the house we knoe instantly that they did not survive. Mr.Mildred's corpse was mutilated and riped apart to the point where we hardly reconized him. We found bits and pieces of Ms.Mildred scatterd acros the yard. The door is busted down and we smell a roten stench come from inside. We go in and see that the children where not lucky either they had been stabed in the hearts and one was even riped in half! We desided that we need to take thier suplise.So we did. And not to soon because the second we closed the basement doorthe sounds of the cult returned. My mother has died from her illnes. At this point my brother grabs a machete and a pistol and tells us hes going to kill the cult. My bro may be the most athletic of the group but stil I think its the worst idea ever and I try to stop him but he slams the basement door shut and he puts something over it so the cult dosent see it. For a while we hear gunshots and slashes. I get up to join him thinking he could use help when sudenly he screams. I wach as his blood drips down into the basement. My sister pukes at the sightand then thiers a sound above. the sounds of our nehbors houses being broken into. the sounds of people screaming.the sounds of children crying.the sounds of limbs being riped apart.And the sounds of bodies being stabed into. then we hear the door of our basement get pounded on. an arm bursts through but it dosent look like a human arm. then finaly the door gives way and the cult pours in. But they werent a cult. They wher demons. Every one is riped apart mercilesly as more and more come in until finaly im all thats left. I know that im all thats left. I look to my left and grab a shotgun and looked to my right and grabed the hacksaw. I knew that I might as well go down fighting. and thats hen the fun really began. >:D

tell meh wat u think plz

-erikisyourgod

punk7890 responds:

Aside from lots of spelling mistakes, its decent. :)

Thanks for the review!

cool

i have manny uses for it
as a wierd circus (of death duh) some old house setting maby if its just right when someone is killed or if its a funeral

tell me wat u think
-erikisyourgod

Dungeecount responds:

Sounds like a fitting idea, go right ahead and do what you want with it, just send me the link if and when you do ! :D

Circuses are weeeiiiiirrrdddd

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